Yes, Jack is quite grabby these days.
Yeah true love there Jack…you’re going to get along great all right.
Er. I have a bit of constructive crit if that’s okay. I’ve noticed on a past few pages that for sound effects you’ve typed out the word instead of trying to create the sound. For example her “screech.” As a reader, I merely register the word and my head doesn’t play the sound. Perhaps going SCHREEEEE instead?
PS. As I have been reading since the very beginning of VP I am totally digging the new re-write of their relationship~
Love the ‘ooh orange’ in the thrid panel! Absolutely great
AHAHAHAHAHAHA! Jack’s face in the third panel
also, love the “ooh orange” <3
Emily written very faint in the top panel,,,
Did Jack say that? Or did Jill just hear it?
Reincarnation or Hallucination that is the Question..
OOH, orange… XD
Poor jack, i thing he turn deaf from thet scream of her…
and WAY is he wake up like thet quite often?!
Anyway…..i love jack’s face in the third and fourth panel *ך*
it seem like he get more and more handsome and smexy in every page =]
….Me want MOREEEEEE :E
He just wants someone to love…
You know… When I highlight the page… Its red… and at 1:30 am… Thats really scary. o3o But I love how you have her eyes. ^^ They’re pretty.
Woohoo! orange retinas and a wonderful start to the undead life with a scream to cause your family members to turn in their graves. XD
this is awesome :)
She seems to have some spirit back…
Orange = Chaotic Good?
Time to update the cast bios
It’s updated now, but that page is still a mess and really needs an overhaul so I can edit it more easily. XO