Yeah, another page that may seem ‘familiar’ to some readers.
Yup I remember this, but gotta say I really like what you’ve done with the page!
VERY VERY COOL!
How come I think she will denies ever saying saying Yes?
For that matter how come I got this urge to hummmm here comes the bride.
Love Jacks Evil smile ! It’s like he’s saying “I have done great Evil and now I am Going to be rewarded by doing worse!!
Awwwwww he called her love.
What would he have done if she didn’t answer at all and just stayed unconscious?
Oh I think he said it right there”I can’t let you just dissapear” “But I want your consent”
“Can’t” and “want” being the key words.
Can’t meaning (no choice but turning you) and Want as in (prefer to have)
But she did give her consent. Letting Jack some what off a already sharp Hook.
Yet still giving her denial and Angry Rights, I mean she looked like she was dieing of
Pneumonia or worse TB, But she Might recovered if Jack had not drained her but she was Looking to become a Vampire Hunter. So she at least share some responsibility,And when push came to give, she said “Yes.”
All very nicely done in Very Moral Dark Greys, I missed this wonderful book!
damn i am a girl but the comment rocks
Everyone here seems a bit more restrained in this version. I approve.
look forward to how they develop next.